Emo's art gallery d:

HIA'Z this is some of my art I did  so um yah here is the first one NOTE: yes im using FA too get some of my drawing up

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7551168/ my character emo sad as a angel
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7728254/ um.... I don't know what to say on this one  :toadette  <---- >:V
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7734090/ emo before a toad

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7637234/ my yoshi oc flower
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7669076/ my OC birtina
and lastly my favorite :3
http://www.furaffinity.net/full/7685501/ EMO ANGEL KITTY XD

WELLS thats it hope you liked ^^ also if your wondering what I was using for the drawings was paintool sai and photoshop cs5
 
Your stuff is . . . decent.  Why does most of your pictures are saved as JPG/JPEG?  JPG is an awful file image format because it loses color and quality.  You should start saving your stuff as PNG for now on for your serious stuff.

1 - It's okay.  Wings look wierd.  Why do you have angel wings if your character is 'emo'?  Could've at least used dark bat wings to make some more sense.

2 - This is the only image you linked so far that is PNG.  lol Thanks to the white outline of your text, I would not be able to read what is being said.  Dodge and burn?  Could've made the grass a lot darker since it's night time out.  Since the moon is the only light source during the night, your characters should a bit darker from shading.  Are the white circles suppose to be clouds?

3 - Did you purposely make him glow black?  Again, with the grass, make it darker.  Why is one of his arms a little more wide than the other.

4 - lol Rainbow Gradient Background.  Why does she have a blue stomach?  Shading doesn't make any sense.  :/

5 - One foot is bigger than the other.  lol  Wings are different from each other.  Again with the moon and the shading.

Always give credit if you didn't make your BGs (not for sure if you made them or not.)
Your stuff is okay, but you can use some improvement.  Maybe look up tutorials for some advice.  :U
 
Uhh... Wow. That's really... Something...
What would make it much better: A LOT OF THINGS. Don't dump a ton of filters on everything, gradients should be used sparingly, anatomy needs a ton of work and everybody looks like they were made of sticks (looking at how toads work and seeing if you can at least get their anatomy to work/using a frame helps) dodge and burn is also something that shouldn't be abused, shading is all over the place... Basically work on your anatomy and light sources and don't use so many Photoshop filters and you'll be fine. Also, try practicing realism. Realism is an important style that helps with tricky anatomy and you'll be able to apply the style to your own and make your work a bit more flexible.
And that's my crit for the day, now i'm out to do things.
 
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