Author Topic: Week 3 Individual Challenge #2 - Create a storyline for Mario&Luigi 5  (Read 1558 times)

Offline Brookelas

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Individual Challenge - CREATE A STORYLINE FOR MARIO&LUIGI 5

Another individual challenge... this time involving writing. You have until SUNDAY NIGHT AT 9 PM PST (Midnight EST on Monday) to write a storyline for Mario and Luigi 5. Simple as that. Marking will be done by me, so make it appealing to me. Also, here are some things that I like to help you get started:

-Koopalings
-Toadette
-Cats
-Food
-Lots of playable characters (But not too many... especially in a Mario and Luigi game :3)
-Unexpected stuff

You can choose on how much to write... you can write the entire game if you please... but I would prefer just saying the basic storyline :P

JUDGING

1st - 100 points
2nd - 90 points
3rd - 80 points
4th - 70 points
5th - 60 points

And so on...

Good luck to everyone!

Offline AbsolPowers

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Our story starts out with the evil wizard and witch; Nekko and Wayfurr, the two magic cat-people from the Sweets Kingdom. The two were locked deep down inside a dungeon, but, after three years being locked down there, they have FINALLY eaten through their candy-colored cage. And as they get out... they begin to discuss their evil, EVIL plot. "Alright, let's get plan A and..."

"START IT!"
Our story then takes a turn to somewhere... sweeter in Sweets Kingdom. Young love has arisen between Princess Peach's royal advisor named "Toad" and our feisty (yet fabulous) fungus female, Toadette! Except, the car isn't starting and the two are becoming impatient. Then, the cotton candy clouds grow dark overhead. "I didn't expect overcast today..." Toad wonders.
"Oh, you better like it, because it's your VERY last day!"
Nekko and Wayfurr appear with a horde of Bittersweets, evil candy goblins that only serve the two magicians. The two aren't going to go down without a fight though! After a bit of amusing dialogue, the Tutorial battle begins with two Bittersweet Chips.

After the battle it switches again, to Mario, Luigi, and a kidnapped Peach. "Help!" she exclaims while in the arm of Bowser and his fiendish children. But something was different about them... they were speaking robotically and looked as if they were hypnotized.
"Let's go, father," the children all buzz simultaneously and whizz away with the princess away. Mario, obviously frustrated, tries to track them with a map. While his vision is blocked, Bittersweets attempt to attack a cowarding Luigi. Another battle starts, with a now noticing Mario and Luigi against some Bittermints.

Now here is where the story takes into two parts.
Three koopalings (Larry, Iggy, and Morton) are faced by Mario and Luigi in Gumdrop Jungle, Icing Snocaps, and Rainbrawl Falls respectively.
Three others (Lemmy, Roy, and Wendy) are faced by Toadette and Toad in Redhot Forest, Gingerbread Ruins, and Fairy Floss Peaks respectively.
You can switch at any time in the center of the Sweets Kingdom, Candy Court, between Team Toadstool and the Mushroom Plumbers. However, you can only get back to town at save spots.
After beating each team's quest, you will be ambushed by Nekko for Team Toadstool and Wayfurr for the Mushroom Plumbers.

You must have realized a certain blue-haired Koopaling, that being Ludwig taken out of the mix. Well, after completing BOTH quests, the Sweets Kingdom starts to warp because of Wayfurr's magic and Nekko's great mind's product of destruction, dubbed "The Sprinkling Machine." (Nekko was mad at Wayfurr for naming it such a lame title)

This warped world is called "The Last Morsels" and because of all these locations be smashed together and moved all around, the two teams discover each other. Together, the teams of for try to traverse the strange land in a new way of gameplay, identical to the game series of Mother/Earthbound. The team of four has to jump, climb, hammer, smash, and battle their way through smashed together levels of previous worlds. For example, watch out for thin ledges from Fairy Floss Peaks to lava filled walks from Redhot Forest. Or slippery leaps from Icing Snocaps to switch puzzles from Rainbrawl Falls! Finally, the heroes all reach the dreaded Black Licorook Tower. After several puzzling trials, including a section where the heroes team's get messed up and turned into Toad and Luigi and Mario and Toadette.

When they reach the top, they walk into Wayfurr hypnotizing both Ludwig and Bowser. "Oh?" she asks, "Oh boy, your early!"
The two koopa's then rise with her command and a battle takes place between Team Toadstool and Ludwig, and Mushroom Plumbers and Bowser. After the battle, Nekko swoops in, shooting lightning bolts at the two mushroom guys. The plumbers jump at him, and a battle pursue between them. When he is defeated, he crumbles into rotten candy. His now revealed SHREIKS and binds the winners in licorice. However, Team Toadstool recovers and Wayfurr and them attack each other. After the battle, the two unbind our heroes in red and green. But, the four panic, as the Princess is nowhere to be seen.

A gentle scream echoes through out the chamber, just after the room starts to crumble. Peach then falls through the ceiling in Bowser's arms. He says he's not stealing her, and he's jumps out of the tower shouting back "CATCH UP TO ME!"

Basically, it's the same runaway sequence from the end of Dream Team except it's not as repetitive and has a time limit of three minutes. Finally, the end has arrived, and the now revealed Cheif Sweets thanks you as the scene flips to Mario, Peach, Toadette, Toad, AND Luigi all go on a vacation. The credits are just pictures as below:
Peach and Mario watering some candy flowers
Luigi running away from an Arachnod in the Redhot Forest
Toad nagging at Peach in front of the Candy Castle
Toadette nibbling on a large cookie at Gumdrop Jungle's large bridge.
King Candy and Mario shaking hands
Toad, Luigi, and Peach smiling at Mario and Toadette making a funny face.
The whole crew sitting on a candy bench

THE END!

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                Far off in a place known as Rewopton, there is a treasure rumored to make abilities brought about by items last forever if the possessor wishes so. Naturally, rumors quickly spread of the Mushroom Kingdom's most notorious villains trying to steal it. The first ones are just bands of common enemies who end up nowhere but jail, but one day, both Toad and Toadette rushed to the Mario Brothers with serious news: Bowser and his troops had visited Rewopton and were already terrorizing innocent villagers, including some of her closest friends. She, the Mario Brothers, Peach, and Toad set out, hoping things weren't too late.
   While onboard the cruise, reports begin to surface of Bowser's army taking over the whole territory, so the group must stop far away from Rewopton's capital. The group talks with some townsfolk to get the facts straight. Shortly after, a large group of Hammer Bros. and Shy Guys attack! All five escape unharmed, but are forced to watch the city of Primesburg crumble. After breezing through Ominous Onlook Caverns, they fight and drive away one of the Koopa armies. In reward, the citizens of Brawn Lanes give them a magical book able to store information on enemies they meet(Think the Tattle ability) and the Sacred Fire Flower, which Mario is told only to use in the darkest of hours. They then travel through the suspiciously mysterious Worldlia Forest full of puzzles, almost as if a mystic force was pulling the strings on purpose. Toad disappears in the place, forcing Mario to use the Sacred Fire Flower so the remaining four can escape.Then there's another town and the Elepride Cliffside. When they finally arrive at the capital, they catch up to Bowser and the Koopalings and chase them into Radiant Ruins, where the Super Rewop-Up Chalice is kept. Throughout their quest in the temple, the brothers encounter the knocked-out Koopalings saying that another beast threw them all out while fighting Bowser. When they get to the second-to-final chamber, they hear roaring from Bowser himself. Bowser and another previously unencountered spirit-being known as The Protector temporarily team up to destroy the Brothers, but they fail. Victorious, Mario and Luigi approach the door.

        Once inside, they hear clapping, but no one else is there, except a floating Sacred Ice Flower near the artifact. Mario blindly jumps toward the object and attacks with his flower, only for the Ice Flower to defend. Both blasts hit the chalice and a blinding light is cast. Seven gems embedded in the chalice burst out and exploded. The impact pushed Mario back, and revealed King Boo to be the perpetrator. "My servants controlled that forest and saw you coming while I was level-grinding and stuff; then I realized, 'If the Super Mario Brothers are coming, why don't they just do it for me. Your defeating of The Protector allowed me to just float right in. Pfffth, but no, you had to mess everything up and make more work for the both of us, and by the way, you look even more dorky than before, and that says a lot! Eee hee hee... Now to fix the continent you ruined for me! Bye-bye Lou-sers!" King Boo then leaves angrily. The Brothers exchange looks and notice each other now in Penguin Suits! They then take an exit tunnel to find the setting changed from a beach into an ice land, where everyone living there has turned into actual Penguins. Only the brothers can go out into the bracing temperatures. They wander for quite some time, trying to seek an answer, until they come across a weakened Protector. He initially fights them out of fear, but Mario gives him a charred petal as a sign of trust. He agrees to help them in their quest and gives them a Magic P-Wing, which can warp them anywhere; in order to do so, they must escort him to certain sites on the continent. He restores the capital and the ruins outskirts, teaches them how to use their newfound abilities at any time, then seals himself in an Orb Form that Luigi carries around from place to place. These locales include the fire-fied Ominous Onlook Volcano, where Bowser is once again fought,(Fire Flower), sky-shot Loftlia Forest and Primesburg (Tanooki Tail), Mini/Mega Elepride Spaceside(Mini and Mega Mushrooms). The rocks grew so big, they literally shot off the planet, (all of which in no particular order) and a new area known as Unify Plains (Cat Bell).

         However, the fivesome are ambushed by King Boo, who has been "Boo-ifying" the rest of the place. By this time, The Protector is strong enough to face his new-found arch enemy. They fight intensely until King Boo threatens to use Toad as a shield for his most powerful attack as a last resort. The Protector initially doesn't care, but Mario, Peach, and Toadette physically attack him to make him stop, igniting questions of loyalty. Amid the confusion caused by his trick, King Boo tries to kidnap Luigi,  but The Protector lives up to his name, defending Luigi not once, but twice when King Boo uses a scepter he accumulated during his journey to turn Mario, Toadette, Peach, and the environment ghostlike. He quickly reverts Peach back to human form, only to take her away. Luigi tries fruitlessly to stop him, but the King scares him. Luigi then turned to The Protector and two Boos floating beside him. He screams and cowers at the sight, but soon realizes it's just Boo forms of his two friends. Boo Mario waves at his brother and asks The Protector if he may turn them back. He refuses and tells them that they are no longer allies due to the recent happenings. Luigi stops their argument by telling the trio that they were all set up by King Boo. The Protector calmly admitted that he was so caught up in his duties, that he didn't think about the others. Boo Mario and Boo Toadette also apologized, but it took more coaxing from Luigi, his only true friend at this point, to get him to change them back.

     The four set off towards where King Boo went. They finally come to a palace where the rich used to live prior to King Boo's takeover. Just outside the door, Luigi proclaimed he couldn't enter, leaving the other three to finish the quest alone, but The Protector had a solution. Before he could reveal it, a Boo horde attacked them. Mario and The Protector were able to push past those attempting to block the door and make things safe for Luigi, but Toadette couldn't get inside; she narrowly escapes capture, but she knows she can no longer help. After making their way upstairs, evading King Boo's numerous minions and traps in the process, the trio rescues Peach and Toad. Sensing more danger, Mario gives them the Magic P-Wing; they warped back to the now-normal Pridesburg. The three heroes made last-minute preparations for their final fight and thrust into King Boo's Rewopean Throne Room. He scoffed on how they could have made it so far, when he made things so hard. The Protector then became serpent-like and enveloped himself around Luigi, giving him the courage to fight, while he would occasionally pop out if he wanted to use his powers. After some time(Halfway through), Everyone on both sides began to show fatigue. King Boo tried to make the room dark, but the brothers quickly turn the lights back on. Even later(three-quarters), King Boo retries this tactic; this time with success for his "Secret Plan." After they defeat him, The Protector becomes independent of Luigi and the three rejoice. Mario removes the King's crown, which causes the being to dissolve into several small exhausted Boos. These "kings" were imposters who had doubled for King Boo for the battle's last phase(He triggered the blackout to prevent them from finding out while fighting)! Luigi cried violently, while Mario noticed a piece of folded paper inside the fake crown. He unfolded it, revealing a picture of King Boo sticking his tongue out above the word "BOO!" in all capital letters. Mario put the card in his pocket. The Protector, now holding a regenerated Rewop-up Chalice, talked with the regular Boos on becoming assistant guards in his temple, to make sure nothing like this happened again. They reluctantly agreed. He then took the scepter King Boo had left behind and restored his continent. The five Mushroom heroes reunited in the capital and celebrated peace once again. The Protector had even learned to loosen up and forgive Mario, Peach, and Toadette, as he shook all of their hands, Many people gave him gifts and goodbyes before he left. They all had an excellent time.
"At last, the promise has been made..." and then some. :ssb4cloud:
:luigi: :toadette: :toad: :mario: :peach: :daisy: :rosalina: :donkeykong: :diddykong: :shyguy: :boo: :penguin: :ssb4luigi: :ssb4rosalina: :ssb4kirby: :ssb4kingdedede:  :ssb4pikachu: :ssb4jigglypuff: :ssb4toonlink: :ssb4link: :ssb4zelda: :ssb4sheik: :ssb4palutena: :ssb4villager_f: :ssb4reflet: :ssb4lucina: :ssb4kamui::ssb4mewtwo:

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Alright, two purple team members entered and that is it.

1st: LuigiFanGCN3DS
2nd: AbsolPowers

So, Purple Team, you get 190 points.

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Cool! What were some of your favorite parts?
"At last, the promise has been made..." and then some. :ssb4cloud:
:luigi: :toadette: :toad: :mario: :peach: :daisy: :rosalina: :donkeykong: :diddykong: :shyguy: :boo: :penguin: :ssb4luigi: :ssb4rosalina: :ssb4kirby: :ssb4kingdedede:  :ssb4pikachu: :ssb4jigglypuff: :ssb4toonlink: :ssb4link: :ssb4zelda: :ssb4sheik: :ssb4palutena: :ssb4villager_f: :ssb4reflet: :ssb4lucina: :ssb4kamui::ssb4mewtwo: