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cheifchillypants said:
cheifchillypants said:
now for my story.
Mario, Luigi, Peach, Daisy, Wario, Waluigi, Toad, Toadette, Yoshi, AND DK are all sent shooting into the wild blue yonder by a giant slingstar. While you're flying past the stars, Roselina comes and tells you that Bowser has taken the staff that controls the stars, the star rod. Roselina then allows you to choose between the 10 characters you start with. She then takes you to a small planet that has 10 regular sized slingstars, and one giant slingstar silhouette. Roselina tells you the huge slingstar takes twice as many star peices, and that each small slingstar has a board that gives you a star piece. I have and idea for the first two boards. Gearmos junk yard and Penguins ice slide.
Gearmos junk yard is basically like Wario's battle field in smp1. Gearmos send you through a warp tube from island to island. You look for the gold Gearmo, he gives you a star for 20 coins. Silver Gearmo gives you 10 coins. Just find a gold Gearmo, but he and silver Gearmo use the warp chute to get around, so don't count on it being easy.
Penguin ice slide is like Goombas Booty Boardwalk in smp8, just pay the elder Penguin 50 coins, and then coach Penguin gives you a quick tunnel that doesn't have any spaces back to the beginning.
A third level could be a Whittle treetop level. As for the shop, you use coins, power stars, and grand stars. 100 coins=1 star. 10 stars=1 grand star. They're all used in the shop. And 10 starpieces=1 giant slingstar. Whenever you win the board in story mode, you unlock the character that features the level. And once you use the big slingstar, you compete in the bowser level against 3 of Bowser's minnions, Petey Pirhanna, Dry Bones, and Goomba. Once you win, you unlock them in opposite order. You go one more time, win one more time, and unlock the Koopa king himself. The character spaces are Banana spaces with DiddyKong replacement of DonkeyKong spaces, but a mini game instead of a free star. Graffiti spaces with BowserJr replacement of Bowser Mninigame, and new Comet space with Roselina. For the record, I got that idea from someone else, but it's good. And I know it's 24 characters, and 11  levels, but I think it'd be fairly awesome.         
ok, I got a Penguin board, a Whittle board, and a Gearmo board. I came up with the idea of a boo board, a Honeybee hive, an underwater Blooper level, a Pianta beach, a Bo-bomb fortress, a Chimp jungle and a Luma Obseervitory. So the characters are; Mario Luigi Wario Waluigi Peach Daisy Yoshi DK Toad Toadette Gearmo Penguin Whittle Honeybee Blooper Pianta Bo-bomb Chimp Luma Goomba PeteyPirhana Drybones Bowser. Cool, or not cool? My vote, neither, totally awesome!
Wait, Whittle treetop level seems exactly like Chimps jungle, so Chimp can be the shopkeeper, Whittle can keep the jungle, but there still has to be a 10'th level, so Star Rabbit winter wonderland seems like a good replacement. I know Star Rabbit's level seems like Penguin's, but Penguin's level is in an ice cave, and Star Bunny's level is in a winter landscape. 
 
cheifchillypants said:
cheifchillypants said:
cheifchillypants said:
cheifchillypants said:
cheifchillypants said:
now for my story.
Mario, Luigi, Peach, Daisy, Wario, Waluigi, Toad, Toadette, Yoshi, AND DK are all sent shooting into the wild blue yonder by a giant slingstar. While you're flying past the stars, Roselina comes and tells you that Bowser has taken the staff that controls the stars, the star rod. Roselina then allows you to choose between the 10 characters you start with. She then takes you to a small planet that has 10 regular sized slingstars, and one giant slingstar silhouette. Roselina tells you the huge slingstar takes twice as many star peices, and that each small slingstar has a board that gives you a star piece. I have and idea for the first two boards. Gearmos junk yard and Penguins ice slide.
Gearmos junk yard is basically like Wario's battle field in smp1. Gearmos send you through a warp tube from island to island. You look for the gold Gearmo, he gives you a star for 20 coins. Silver Gearmo gives you 10 coins. Just find a gold Gearmo, but he and silver Gearmo use the warp chute to get around, so don't count on it being easy.
Penguin ice slide is like Goombas Booty Boardwalk in smp8, just pay the elder Penguin 50 coins, and then coach Penguin gives you a quick tunnel that doesn't have any spaces back to the beginning.
A third level could be a Whittle treetop level. As for the shop, you use coins, power stars, and grand stars. 100 coins=1 star. 10 stars=1 grand star. They're all used in the shop. And 10 starpieces=1 giant slingstar. Whenever you win the board in story mode, you unlock the character that features the level. And once you use the big slingstar, you compete in the bowser level against 3 of Bowser's minnions, Petey Pirhanna, Dry Bones, and Goomba. Once you win, you unlock them in opposite order. You go one more time, win one more time, and unlock the Koopa king himself. The character spaces are Banana spaces with DiddyKong replacement of DonkeyKong spaces, but a mini game instead of a free star. Graffiti spaces with BowserJr replacement of Bowser Mninigame, and new Comet space with Roselina. For the record, I got that idea from someone else, but it's good. And I know it's 24 characters, and 11  levels, but I think it'd be fairly awesome.         
ok, I got a Penguin board, a Whittle board, and a Gearmo board. I came up with the idea of a boo board, a Honeybee hive, an underwater Blooper level, a Pianta beach, a Bo-bomb fortress, a Chimp jungle and a Luma Obseervitory. So the characters are; Mario Luigi Wario Waluigi Peach Daisy Yoshi DK Toad Toadette Gearmo Penguin Whittle Honeybee Blooper Pianta Bo-bomb Chimp Luma Goomba PeteyPirhana Drybones Bowser. Cool, or not cool? My vote, neither, totally awesome!
Wait, Whittle treetop level seems exactly like Chimps jungle, so Chimp can be the shopkeeper, Whittle can keep the jungle, but there still has to be a 10'th level, so Star Rabbit winter wonderland seems like a good replacement. I know Star Rabbit's level seems like Penguin's, but Penguin's level is in an ice cave, and Star Bunny's level is in a winter landscape.
I got an idea! In mp8, the characters were just randomly competing for the star rod, then Bowser  took it and you had to get it back by beating Hammer Bro and Blooper. But in my suggestion of mp9, Bowser already took the star rod, and you're trying to get it back. So bowser is probably having the star pieces protected. So here's my level chart:
Gearmo Level-Whomp King Penguin level-Chief Chilly Star Bunny Level-Fire Bro Whittle Level-Hammer Bro Honeybee level-Boomerang Bro Blooper Level-Snow Bro Boo Level-King Boo Pianta Level-Mummy Pokey Bo-bomb Level-Big Bo-bomb Luma Level-Bowser Jr
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ok, so the evil guys next to the name of the level is the star piece protector, an enemy made to stop you and screw you over! Oh, and add Magikoopa to the list of enemies bowser has waiting for you at his level. 25 characters. Tell me if it's too much, please be honest. I worked hard on thinking this up, so I want constructive feedback.
add shy guy after goomba and before dry bones.
Order of characters: Mario Luigi Peach Daisy Toad Toadette Yoshi DK Wario Waluigi Gearmo Penguin Whittle StarBunny Blooper HoneyBee      Bo-bomb Pianta Boo Luma Goomba ShyGuy DryBones PeteyPrhana MagiKoopa Bowser. 26 characters with the return of DK and Bowser and the descent of hammer bro and birdo(yay :D)
 
Egh. I don't really have any story suggestions except that I'd want the Koopalings to be added in a Story Mode for a Mario Party. I'd want the story system reverted back to how Mario Party 3's story was.
 
i think the story should be that mario and friends are on a vaction some where random  then a dark shadow  over comes the vactioning place they all look up and a big ship was in the air mario  new strait a away it had somthing to do with bowser. then a big ray came down on them they tryed to run but they coudnt move hten they got sucked up into the ship. Mario luigi peach daisy dk wario waluigi and yoshi and birdo. Bowser said mario have you ever wondered were your half friends have gone off too. Mario said every body that i know are my full friends except you and your minions. .... Finally we are here. As bowser peared out the window. Bowser said mario if you want to get out of here you an your green pal here are going to find the five secret gems hiding in the boards there five boards three worls and a surprise at the end along the you will find you friends here and the ones that are not here there will be bosses challenges and more boos take the brothers friends and scatter them. mario said no and ran but bowsers rob assistants pulled the brother back. mario luigi and bowser landed bowser threw them off and took off mario and luigi knew what they had to do what bowser said. [part2 below]

Part two: the first world is the past world with five retro stages from party45678 and ds the second is the new world it may sound kind of plane but if you think about it it sounds interesting. it has five new stages. The dark world has five knew stages to but in a more negative surrounding if you catch my drift. Then if you remember bowser said a surprise thats the final stage Bowsers mad circus cruise. with that stage it holds the final boss ill have to think of that. it has all sorts of action there. in story mode there is no boss.

sorry for little errors in my story line but i hoped you enjoyed it. ;)

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mario, luigi, wario, waluigi, yoshi, peach, daisy, birdo were all in vacation in delfino harbor. At evening mario and peach dancing at a party every boddy was doing there own thing there. mario said im tired im going back to the hotel. ok deer peach said.mario got in bed and went to sleep..... the next morning he went in to peach's room and know body was there he went to daisys room to ask her were peach is niether luigi or any of his friend, mario started to panic. he went to the party house know one was there. then mario found a note. Dear mario: if you want to see any body meet me at the center of delfino harbor at 12:00. P.S don t be late. Mario thought who wrote this letter. Between now and that time mario asked the town people what happened last night. A blue noki said it was normal until the lights went out for about 5 minutes then it was normal. Eventually when everybody calmed down we went... mario was gone. Mario had one minute to get there then he seen a odd looking koopa. as mario got closer it glanced at mario then he put a blue robe on then glasses it was kamek. mario tryed to run but was surrounded by hammer bro, dry bones and koopa kid. mario was nervous he didn't no what to do. Then mario started floating he looked down it was taking him up mario  tryed to squirm but coudn't to boos appeared holding his hands and legs it was useless. then two bullet bills came down and picked up the koopas one had kamek and hammer bro the other had dry bones and koopa kid. the bullets took them up into a ship mario notced he was going the same direction but slower. mario and the boos reached the ship then mario got thrown off, quickly hammer bro and kamek chaned mario's hands and legs together. A door opened Bahaha! Mario long time know see. Looking for your little friends. Don't worry kid my boos scattered them before i pick you up. But since ti's fair, thers one way you can see your friends.HOW! Calm down chump were almost ther... WERE. you will see Bahahahahah! 5 mins later... Were here i will explain. There are 8 stages get past them, each stage vs one of my minions when or should i say if you beat them theres a portal that appears. After you proceed you move to the next board. If you complete the seventh i will give you further instructions but for now we here koopa troopa is your first opponent he's waiting. bowser unchains mario and throws him out oh yah just in case it gets boring you have until a four days to complete this plenty of time. I will be waiting Bahahahaha! as bowser takes off. Mario spots koopa MARIO the competition doesn't start till tomorrow there huts for us to sleep for the night be out here by nine or else your hope for your friends are gone we have alarms. You will be lucky if you can beat me he chuckles as he closes door. Mario set the alarm and fell asleep. Part two will be posted tomorrow.
 
Mario raced out he seen koopa lets go mario . mario beats koopa in the board.your more skilled then you look said koopa as he walks away. mario was just about hop in the portal then he heard a yelp. Koopa was standing there. Hah if you think im giving up think again. yoshi was beside him in the cage. you will have to beat me in my mini game if you want your friend back, mario accepted his challenge. Mario beast koopa and grabed the key away. koopa went in his shell and slid away. mario unlocked the cage. mario told yoshi to back to the kingdom. yoshi nodded and jumped away. mario jumped in the portal. Eventually it was the end of the day mario beat 3 boards and rescued yoshi, luigi, wario. mario thought he will have lots of time to do this as he set the alarm and drifted to sleep. I will post part 3 later or tomorrow. i skipped two but mario beat dry bones and paratroopa. Mario will vs. kamek the next day. Bye for now.
 
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